YOWIE!!! really fantastic work here. it’s clear you had something To Say with this work and i think you said it very well. it’s really great to watch this feeling of creeping dread emerge into the horrifying conclusion of this relationship. the most horrible slow boiling of a frog possible. the presentation was also insanely polished, i thought all the different frames and set pieces you had worked really well.
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i was going to start this comment with ‘anita i think we gotta kill this guy’ but uhhh situation Handled. poor anita. though i can’t help but feel some relief for her, too.
i also thought the final conclusion of anita just saying she wants to fucking read some yaoi was hilarious and interesting especially in the context of the jam. of course it was one of sunny’s hangups but it was fascinating that it was the one that it ended on. not sure i have something to Say About It but i am chewing on it.
thank you for sharing! i very much enjoyed it.