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This is beautiful. The presentation and art direction here is so purposeful and filled with a togetherness that I can't help but stare wide-eyed at it. This is also the most inventive use of RPGMaker I've seen for a visual novel. I really appreciate a lot of what it does and goes for. The aesthetic crafted here is masterful and it doesn't stray from the feeling it creates whatsoever.

Given the inventiveness, though, unfortunately comes jank—mousing out of the window at any point will mess up the cursor, which can't be fixed until you find an interactable thing, which can be difficult to find outside of screens with the save point. Some of the interactions really are difficult to find and I got stuck for multiple minutes on multiple screens trying to find the tiny hitbox to progress (I nearly quit at the second surgery scene. I knew I had to find the interaction in the stitches, and yet it took me so long to do so) The progression of them didn't make sense at a lot of points and they were so tiny or obscured by some scenic factor that I'd resort to quickly scanning my mouse across the window and rapidly clicking. If this is still in development or liable to receive an update, I think adding a bigger clickbox to all the interactions or some active (moving/flashing/etc) visual indicator would make this game like 20x better for me. Getting stuck so often took a lot of the steam out of the cinematic presentation and indulgence into the narrative for me.

With that said, this is one of my favorite entries so far because of again just how gorgeous it is. I respect this artistically and technically and love how it feels. I will probably check out some of your other work, and definitely be on the lookout for things by you in the future.

thank you so much for this ^__^ i am really grateful you still enjoyed it despite its flaws....i will def be making a technical update later on (such as audio & formatting stuff i just didnt have the time for </3) rpgmaker is a very powerful engine but it will absolutely test you if its used for anything besides rpgs lole.....but that is exactly why i love to use it. this feedback will most definitely be taken into consideration, thank u again <3