I think you're doing a novel, interesting thing here, but I'm still wrapping my head around it.
The d6 system makes sense, and I follow the character creation, but the flow of a cycle is a bit unclear.
Correct me if I'm wrong here.
- A Song is a longer campaign of many sessions.
- A Verse is a single scenario, probably played in a session. The Redactor at the beginning of the verse states the general challenge, and offers characters for the players to embody.
- The players then work through the scenario as their characters, rolling dice to resolve uncertainty.
- After the verse, the players write unshared notes on what happened, or what they think is about to happen? These notes are used to construct the poem.
- Players only act in one verse? Meaning you need new players for further verses?
- After the last verse is played, the redactor uses the secret notes to compose a final mythic epic and shares it with the group.