I really enjoyed this work.
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The earlier parts of the game are darkly hilarious (I love the dynamic between Katurian and our fairy protag), and the presentation is top-notch. Gonna be taking notes from this one for my own reference, especially that ending, wow. (And also... a happy ending for a VN in this jam?! That did throw me for a loop, in a good way.)
Since you asked for honest critique, I think the one thing that made me feel less connected to the visual novel was the chess scene. I'm sure chessheads would get a kick out of it, but for me (someone who isn't), I couldn't really navigate what was going on, the significance of the moves being played, et cetera, et cetera. That said, the presentation of that segment was my favorite in the game (seeing the characters emotions through the board was awesome), and I loved watching the two fairies work together... Really good stuff.
Anyways. Me when I approach my cats:
