I really could not anticipate anything that would happen in this one. Short and just about anything but sweet, veering between heavy insights into the mindsets of a toxic relationship and an almost slapstick tone of visceral violence. Could definitely use some proofreading (forgivable! sounds like there's a lot going on, and I was never confused about what was happening anyway) but the dramatic core is there and the protagonist's supernatural abilities are intriguing. I will also say that I know it's a startlingly common artstyle choice these days but it does bother me that the characters' faces look much younger than they're presumably meant to be. That said I thought the art was well-drawn (if occasionally a little incongruous with the text) and blending it with photographic backgrounds helps add to the surreal b-movie edge.
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Raven here.
Thank you so much! We kinda made the game in a rush cause a lot of things happened during development, personal problems, college, etc. We are really happy that you liked it <3 and also, as the writer, really happy that i could capture what I wanted even if its short. I must say that we have plans to expand on this game in the future, we really loved working in this project, and also, the supernatural abilities are something very interesting, there is a world outside of this short story and... well. Things happen ;)