The art is really intricate. Messy at times, but I really loved it...
This man is taking a shovel and meeting the bed of rocks and digging a coffin and digging into the core of the sun. It starts out slow, sure... but it's someone who can't help themselves; contemplating exact things, perfect things... the little crease in their nose, and the pimple on their right cheek... things like that are quite annoying if you bring them up with anyone. It may seem small, but Tula loves the shovel. He likes the sound it makes.
The writing's great, the story is a little less good but the prose makes up for it. Music, especially in the beginning was great, too.
Tula, upon burning the caravan, really left an impression on me, and this was one of my favourites from the jam. Really well done.