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Even if it happens to be generic in structure, it's written well - the presentation, though, I thought was a bit lacking. The music is great, but the lack of expressions hurt...

The first half is lighthearted. Like going on a nice walk with too many limbs, so it takes longer. We get flashbacks, but I got a dark feeling. There were some other dark, humid feelings later in the half, but it made for a great lunch.

The second half is much more serious. Depending on how cowardly you are, you'll either get a terrible ending or a terrible ending or a terrible ending.

It's very real in contrast to the first half, and I greatly enjoyed it; real, grounded. The problem is that I got a dark feeling from the flashbacks, but it was only because I felt it being at all was doing that. If I didn't do that, it'd mean the first half wasn't setting it up... wait...

The two are at odds...

I loved reading this novel, but it wants to be pulled in both directions until it can go any farther. It's straining to love the earth.

I hope to see you again soon!

Heya, thanks for the feedback. I'd have gotten to this way sooner but life's been kinda wild in and out of hospital BUT ENOUGH MOPING.

Presentation issues seem to be the through line. Yeah, I struggled with it. My artists didn't have enough time, scope management was more a suggestion to us. 

The intent was for the first half and second half to have a much smoother transition, though that didn't quite play out. My own fault for slamming the breaks on too quickly with it. 

I am however glad you enjoyed the second half. I'll admit I think that's where a lot of my focus went.


Thank you for playing, and I will 100% check out yours now that I actually have time again