The writing is excellent, even if there are some formatting problems. The lack of SFX and music hurt... although, it isn't entirely barren of purpose either. It's like, when I heard this novel's music, it was like I was struggling to remember, to hold onto a song. I loved it without knowing why, eh? I loved even without the accuracy of why i loved... Yeah, the music is monotonous, but it fits really well. Presentation wasn't focused on, because of the very meditative state... it left me wanting.
Overall, I hope to remember this even after I lose my skin.