UI design and Presentation was nice here. I particularly liked your sprites and the expressions in the text portraits. I would have like to see more expressions for the Necromance character (I didnt see any in the portion that i played) as i think these really complimented the dialogue. In a dialogue heavy game like this they make the experience much more enjoyable. I also enjoyed the scene with the jump.
I found it was a bit slow to get started. I think some of the dialogue in the opening scene would have been better if it was staggered throughout the gameplay to allow the player to get on with playing.