Your kid sucks. Hey, but I'm free. Take me. Take me to the store. We can get some pudding pops and large teas there. We should go. In fact should we go and stay there for much too long, as to be considered 'loitering'(i still think it's a fake term but whateverrrrr) and then we'll sneak into the underpaid employees house and have sex! We nutured a grudge against them, because they decided to be there at that unforunate time. We hated them, because they were unfortunate to be them at that one moment. And we could put all our powers into hating them, because we were father and son, and no matter how much hate we gave them, we had love in our life.
Liked the presentation. I like having a dad, and this novel has that. Also I agree with Fuse very much, you could've had the sex be nerdy. Ah, but the dad is lame, you say? Well, he can be nerdy, it's just not focused on so much. That could've been alright, too. The sex scenes were good! Ezra growing as a person was great! It was happy.
Oh, my favourite line in the novel was, "He hadn't thought this through, had he?" Palindrome.