Fuujin and Raijin? Well, this is my kinda place !
Along with the idea of not understanding anything, really loved the story beats, and Ryley running on fumes without our knowing so... if only Kameron was spelt with a C and not a K... that aside, from the moment I saw the conlang I knew that the VN was going to end up with a lot of 'white noise', but that's what you get with this type of story, it's only going to make sense later. ...still. It is what it is.
The presentation is great, and gets especially good towards the end! So many shots of fighting.
About the ending... I'm supposed to remember the title the entire time, but it slipped me so intially I thought it was out of left field, but it solidifies that love. The language of love, and love without language. Ryley loved Kameron more than anything. He loved him more than life. In fact did he make his heart rumble...
Overall, it was a pretty good read! You're strong!