I thought this submission was a little dangerous, especially in comparison to what you've already wrote. The presentation was great as usual, but the message...
It's very volatile, and I understood what you tried to say with this, but what actually happens in the story... how can I say it doesn't make sense? It feels like all of the werewolves tossed out their fear as they protested (which was already in vain seeing as the police literally drove through a group of werewolves)... why? Why did they do this. Why did they all trust this rando. Oh, because the leader agreed!... for some reason, even with years of knowledge of the persecution of werewolves, and rowdy enough to burn the confederate flag in front of everyone coming out of their homes; truly? I thought Zizi was acting a double agent.
The moon religion was cool, but it could've been expanded more. Honestly, if you leaned into that more as a righteous cause, I think it would've amplified the entire novel, seeing as the first scene starts in a church.
The father/son scenes were the best, even if they didn't involve werewolves too much ...hey, I'm lookin' forward to The Theatre.