Overall amazing job to both of you!! I really liked how sadistic Saden was in viewing this fantasy world as a canvas to project her hatred with the real world, and how her personality clashed with Ingrislia’s. Also liked how the spicy scenes progressed from sensual to bitter to vitriolic and back again.
The art for the characters is adorable and the UI reminds me of old school fantasy games which lends itself well to the world. I also liked the detail of the “burning” in the back of Saden’s mind literally growing brighter and brighter.
I do feel it was a tad difficult to keep up with the exposition of magic and the greater lore of the world such as with the Ilumar and prophecies, but Saden’s obsession and growing hatred of Vivu was the star of the show. It was very raw and compelling and really propelled the story forward imo. Great job again!!!