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The first novel that caught my attention at this jam. On the plus side: it’s an atmospheric and sincere work; you quickly grow attached to the characters and empathize with them. However, the narrative style is a bit uneven, and the story itself drags on a bit; there were moments when I wanted to start skipping over Daisy’s repetitive self-reflection. Nevertheless, my overall impression is positive: it’s not perfect, but good and sincere work. Good luck to the authors.

I apologize if Daizy's thoughts were too repetitive. I appreciate you sticking with it despite this narrative decision. Thank you for your critique.

No offence, I realy like the game! 

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Non-taken. I appreciated your thoughts and am thankful you sticked with it despite its slowness ^^ I am always open to critique, and it's all I can ask for as a writer!