This is my comment on the version DeeperClub-0.35.01.
This was my first time playing your game, and I have to say, it looks great. I like the characters and everything, even though hyper/vore isn't my main thing, but there can be exceptions if sex is involved, and I think you handle that well.
My issues are with the unfinished elements, like the library and Guilmon Maiden Restaurant, which seem incomplete. That’s okay, but I think if you're going to release it that way, there should be some interaction with those areas, like what you did with the hotel employment. Sure, that isn't finished yet, but at least I had something to do there from the start.
I also have a problem with the RNG system you encounter on the streets. There's that skunk-looking character who takes your money unless you want to be her underwear (which is not my kink). The one I dislike the most is the snake guy who vores you with his dick. From what I understand, endurance affects how much your horny meter will increase. I assume it will go up much more slowly if you have a high endurance level. Then there's strength, which allows you to free yourself from being vored much faster. But here's my issue: no matter how high my strength or endurance is, you're still relying on chance, which means you still have chances to lose most of the time. I only managed to get away from the snake guy once.
My favorite street encounter is with the earthworm guy; it's hot when you meet him, and there’s some consequence if your horny meter is too high, then you spend a day with him. I like that. I also love the bouncer Brivaelle and hope to see her fill Melo's rear end in the next update.
Regarding some smaller issues, I noticed that when you encounter the Russian rabbit lady on the subway, Melo doesn't have his tits after buying them. I'm not sure if this is an issue with my computer, but after creating my save states, I select the one I want to load. Still, it loads a completely different save state that I don't remember saving. After many tries, I do manage to load the correct one, so thankfully, they aren’t lost. Still, that shouldn't be an issue.
So far, you have a great sexy game, but there’s a lot of room for improvement, so keep it up.