This was really cool!! The premise is amazing, it has so much tension built into it already. (Reminds me of Of The Devil!). Lynn's wolf design is incredible, and Marie's backstory was very compelling. And the scene where they were in bed together was so sweet.
There were a few typos in the scene with Marie and Lynn in the red string room: I caught "this board coers every wolf case" "so far her ntoes seem to match" "roughh exterior".