The concept is nice story-wise but I didnt understand the game from this.. nor the scope. "The player interacts with the web to find other communities/stores that are selling sustainable products." I don't understand this particularly...
And what are the mechanics, like is your game like a multi-choice/dynamic graphic novel like this https://lunastudios.itch.io/endless-spring-prologue
or is it like a papa louie game, or something else.. A reference game(s) would be super cool
prod plan seems incomplete
well the idea def has potential, esp if it touches on the sales side of things - selling sustainable products to a layman who may or may not care about sustainability is an intriguing point to explore. Rather than focusing on individual/personal decisions, you're focusing on impacting others' decisions, very cool! I do feel like it needs to be a bit more 'gamified' tho