This was a really cute and fun story! I especially liked the mysticism of Tyler and Aryaman meeting in the forest. It had a nice amount of humor as well. It all moved a bit fast but it wasn’t so bad. (although, the cooking took quite a bit of place, I feel^^) The writing was mostly good, a few errors but it was fine. (the English one at least, I can’t say a thing about the Sanskrit lines^^)
The presentation was nice. The sprites look good, and there are a number of really nice CGs. The regular backgrounds were fine too. And this has my favourite soundtrack of the jam, I really like the main motif!^^ The turning around of the sprites doesn’t look quite right most of the time though (I know the issue since I had some trouble making it look good for my submission^^)
The folklore theme is mostly linked to The Cloud Messenger poem, but looking about it, I don’t see much resemblance? There’s no wife or cloud in the VN…
Overall, this is a pretty simple VN, but I liked it a lot. A really fun read. Great job!