This might be an odd thing to mention, but I feel like the run-on sentences are getting more and more out of hand with every update.
You don't have to fill out the whole textbox every time! I wish you'd break up the sentences a little! It's better for the reading flow. If people's eyes glance off the text, they won't find it hot.
Like, one example from v28:
Focusing your attention on your new environment in an effort to distract yourself from your undiminishing arousal, you see that thhe bar is manned by a bored-looking dark elf standing behind the counter and currently cleaning a cup, the sensual woman only taking a moment to raise a hand at you in an idle salute before focusing back on her task.
One sentence, fills out the whole text box, should probably be four or five separate lines instead. And then the very next one:
As she does so, the motions of her swiftly moving hands draw your attention to a small, fancy-looking sign set on the counter which simply reads 'Opal', the elven lady being plainly an official employee of the club tasked with providing refreshments, as further demonstrated by the wide array of glasses and bottles arranged behind her, the impressive collection providing a striking backdrop to her sexy figure.
It's way too much! That's waaaay too many sentences forced into a single one, and way too many words forced into a single textbox.
I can't speak for everyone, but I find these hard to follow and it takes me out of the experience. And when every single line of the erotic descriptions is like that, they're just not very hot...!!
I think you could get a lot of mileage out of splitting lots of overly long lines up. It reads much better to have more lines, each consisting of shorter sentences.