Hello! Very cute game :3 I guess you are using Dialogic in Godot? We are using it too in our game :D The way you personalized the dialog box is very pretty, I love it. We can see the game is still in development and in the process of being polished, so the comments I will say are probably already in your to-do-list, but here is an unorganized list of my thoughts:
- Very fun/cute mini-games, the SFX when cleaning made me laugh.
- I think it would be nice to have some achievements!
- Good jokes in the dialogs. Some typos here and there but I think the writing was quite fluid. I think you should avoid big paragaph like the one close to the intro, where you have to scroll to read, and cut them in parts (most of them are fine though). I also think dialogs options should be locked after you've talked to a character once and they have nothing more to say; that way, you avoid having to click furiously to skip the already-seen text and make it more natural. When you talk to Eduardo first, you can ask him 3 questions; I think it would be nice if the dialog options already visited disapeared after you've clicked on them. You can do all that in Dialogic even if it takes a little bit of reflexion sometimes to get it work smoothly.
- We can see some walking animations in the NPCs are missing for now, but I also think that the MC walking animation seems faster than he actualy is. I would make the character move faster (not the animation though, it's fine as it is). It is a little funny that he's facing camera while jumping also lol. I think you could reuse the walking animation for jumping while moving?
- The transitions (from one place to anothe, and from one scene to another) are a bit brutal. Also, the music is not looping.
- I don't know if there are multiple endings, but I've reached the one where I befriend the 4 other youngsters on the beach. I think it was nice, even if I didn't expect the game to end so quickly. I hope you will add more content.