Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it.
You’re absolutely right about Demon's Pulse leaning too heavily to the left; I did pan some elements, but most of the main melodic and rhythmic parts ended up living on that side, which can definitely get fatiguing over a full listen. I only noticed after you said it. I’ll rework it before using it in‑game. This is my first original game OST, so I really appreciate you pointing these things out, it helps a lot.
Regarding the jam theme, since this is music for a real game rather than something written for the jam, I didn't take many liberties with the narrative description. That said, I tried to reflect the "Mechs" theme angle more through the choice of instruments and the structure of the musical challenges.
Thanks again!