Thank you so much for the detailed, constructive, and affectionate feedback ðŸ˜
You really hit the nail on the head. I find it difficult to write descriptive sentences. lol Since I was creating this on my own for three months without any feedback, I didn't even realize the same sentences were being repeated lmao Thank you so much! I will discuss it with the translator and try to incorporate your feedback! 🥰
Thank you for playing my game!!!
You're very welcome!! Trust me, I know the struggle of being the only writer and not realizing when things are being repeated. I will always, ALWAYS recommend a beta-reader if you have a friend you trust to help you with that! I commend you for doing all of that on your own, girl, I would've lost my mind LMAO
Can't wait to see your future updates, and don't forget to take breaks! <3