Thank you very much for your detailed feedback. I really appreciate the time you took to write it.
You raised many valid points, and I'll definitely do my best to address them.
One small clarification: I assume you played the game in English. That may be why it seemed like the dialogue and writing were generated by an LLM. In fact, I write the entire script myself. I only use an LLM to translate it into English. That said, your observation is still valuable—it just applies to the translation rather than the original writing.
Thank you again for your thoughtful review. I truly appreciate it.