Wow!
Duuuude.
Actually, you caught the plot very nicely, and suggested additions that is pure gold for the story right now. I just finished polishing the backbone of the world and the plot, and reading this is like seeing someone guessing what is happening, while knowing the story is so much fun.
First of all, I will move “thats it for now”, and kidnapping after the first overnight. Also, it is a good questions, if you can trust Gia, why she asked exactly you, who is behind this order, why she undersold how dangerous it was, can you ask her for help, or can you trade her for your safety 😉
I will add a bit more to the demo in few more weeks, bringing more variables and heat to that point, where the story will turn into one of 3 major different branches. What will you choose, will massively affect players karma, and how the world will unfold.
Thank you for the input, it is greatly appreciated!
Aaaand, if you feel fancy, come to our discord and we can talk on the story a bit more ;) Who knows maybe you feel like participate in actual script