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Just started and must say it is quite hard to follow. I think the prologue can be greatly improved by introducing things in a way that makes more sense.

I still have no idea what is up with that competition, what is up with sectors and various organizations, supposed team MC is a part of, who are the large number of almost random characters… Everything is introduced so quickly and many conversations start about one thing, and then abruptly transition to other things multiple times in a row, which does not help with comprehension either.

The writing and transitions are much better than “Industry Baby”, but gives a similar vibe of the author assuming the reader knows the things they clearly can’t know.

I wish there was some introduction about the world the story is set in, some basic mandatory background information. Something that would make the following content make more sense rather than seeming like it started in the middle and I’m a fool for not knowing the prerequisites.

The part after prologue is better, but still left me confused about things. Like I had no idea Akane was part of the team, I either missed it completely or was it not explained or did she just happen to be in the room, but not actually part of the team? 😕

It is a really nice game overall though, thanks!