You sure? I think your title came out really good! I'll see if I have an alt to switch it out with, but I'd encourage you to consider using it.
I would prefer a different title if it's not too much trouble. I saw it last night and after sleeping on it and thinking about it this morning, it just doesn't speak to me.
I'm going to give you an alt, but you're stuck with that (should be featured in the master list)
That's something I can work with, thank you!