Writing is not good, instead big meh.
Balance is poor.UI is annoying.Text... moves.... at... glacial.... pace....
Thanks for the feedback, I've touched up slightly on the balance for Chapter 2.
As for the UI, I've made the pop-up slightly sticky so it doesn't close the moment the cursor is off.
The text should move a lot faster now (with the option to skip it by clicking)
All of that was added to today's update.