Really well done. I loved how thoughtful the integration of all the parts were, especially how the music reflected the atmosphere. There is a trend towards iterations of solipsism and the abject in queer works (especially in trans works), and I think this is a pretty interesting (if quick) foray into that arena, and sympathetic rebuttal of those ideals. But again above all I appreciate how content you two were to take a big swing in such a short and tidy way, that leverages many parts of the form to tell the story. You can tell this is a story made to be a visual novel specifically, with great interest in the form! Also, very cute characters lol, and I loved the howl to the music.