I liked this game.
The story wasn't so original, therefore the plot twist didn't hit that hard, but in the beginning it still wasn't that obvious what was going to happen.
About the visuals: terrific. Both the background and -especially- the characters are so uniquely and well-designed with style and skill that your work deserves to be referred to as ART.
The sounds: they were okay, the background music perfectly created the atmosphere. I also like that a few times the other character cut into what we were speaking/thinking, those mini-jumpscares were a nice addition to the tension, I don't see these often.
I checked out your previous games and social media. The other games (even though both are NSFW) are also so beautiful I didn't want to believe your previous games are completely free and I got this one at 50% off for $2.24.
Give exactly zero fucks about the hate comments. Yeah, sure, this game was short and not really deep, but it's a short Visual Novel and your first. You are an incredible artist and I hope to see more of your work in the future!💙