AAAAaaaaaaaaaAAAAH - Chantelle!! WHY would you do this when I need to write my OWN IF?!?! (kidding, but also - DAMN, the temptation.... XD)
In all seriousness: Can't wait to read revamped ver of this scene (I personally love dialogue-driven moments, where it's just - people bouncing off each other - so I already know I'll have a good time~)
P.S. also - been seeing some of the AI comments, and I - cannot put into words how messed up this 'witch hunt' mentality is.
You are an amazing writer. I have - not ONCE - ever thought you've used AI -- Ever. And: You don't owe them ANYTHING. <3