I like what you’ve got started here, Toasty. Curious to see which direction this story takes. I liked the waking up and being back in the characters past thinking you were at work and feel that could really emphasize the PTSD aspect. Maybe opening a classroom door and that takes you to another part of the military camp, then boom, back to the school. Really pull a mind melting moment. Just my thoughts. Keep it up though dude!
Would recommend.
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