No need to apply what I said to the letter, I might not be your target audience (I don't play any platformer of that type usually). I hope you'll consider continuing work on Chirp Chirp, it's great.
Fun fact: I made a game called ChirpChirpChirp myself for another jam, but its mechanics have nothing to do with yours (and it's clearly not as pretty)
https://gatlink.itch.io/chirpchirpchirp