you got great style going on, honestly feels like you nailed lots of things like the SFX music how they mix and ofc the looks, some things are like having the full screen button of unity vs itch and when you build the screen size you aim for (plus the UI canvas now matching this one as well) and the embedded screen size (usually you want to set this a bit bigger than the games build you made in unity) these are not a criticisms on the game which is great just some stuff I learned by trial and error, I still struggle with the sizing stuff to this day lol
you should definitely pursue making a minigames + point and click adventure in this style, great work!