I really enjoyed the writing! Enjoyed a little less when the game crashed on my Michael road though xD (I was decide to annoy Sunny the most I could and then appeared Michael, and then the game crashed, I should've trust my guts, this sun is a demon!)
One note I have for the very story of the game: "Y/N" was to me such a turn off, it was like a hit projecting me out of your story. I thought "If there is no option to enter my name I would've much rather a random name or a "me". But later I saw that we could enter our name. To me, you should've make it happens at the very very start, before our character ever talked, or before the start of the game.
Also, too long went with only text, no picture. And since there is no music (that I'm aware of, I played in microsoft edge and maybe the music just didnt work?)), it felt pretty austere... :/
Now tell me, were Michael and me supposed to kiss at the end? 😎