Yeah this one's easily the funniest of the May Wolves this go around - I broke out laughing multiple times. While really funny, the lingo could easily come off as odd or slightly irritating, but I think that what elevates this above just a simple joke story is the level of care and effort put in elsewhere - the sprites are well drawn and expressive, the story of a group of idiots making a book/film/visual novel under time constraints is creative (and said book/film/visual novel is also, somehow, coherent - in spite of our scattered view of it), and the various in-game effects that compliment said book/film/visual novel (like the interruption / beep effects, or the ending sequence) showcase quite a lot of genuine effort and elevate the experience.
I also really appreciate the choice of Egyptian mythology and the decision to make a POC-centered story - there's an implied whiteness in a lot of furry work given that they don't immediately read as any specific race and as such borrow from the cultural "default" of their world (which is usually some flavor of american / european), and I love the effort put into both the aesthetics of the work, and the folklore the story borrows from in order to change that.
I think that, were the story longer, it might have wound up getting a bit old due to the meta stuff being slightly hard to follow at times and the comedic writing style perhaps getting a bit old - but as is, at its current runtime, it honestly feels kind of perfect.