AWESOME, great work LOVE the revision!!!
The opening is so sweet, the flow is fantastic.
Just wanna point out an story line mishap, When reader (me) looses his phone and goes looking for it at the collage.
"You search in the app, but you can't find anything. Useless junk"
Ummmmm, how can I use an app on my phone that I lost?? That is the reason I went to the collage.
Awwwwwww, the lunchroom scene with Roberto was not there. Will it be in day 2? I really enjoyed that one, a classic funny that never gets old.
Once again FANTASTIC work to you and the TEAM! THANK-YOU for your work <3