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All right. Fair enough, the story hasn’t fully explained what’s fully going on yet since it’s a slow build up. It’s not just me writing; I have a co-writer who helps me out. Do you mind if I share this with him for consideration?

I hope you tell him everything I said. I know I was harsh, but I stand by it. Maybe changing the description would help. It did not meet the expectation you set. It would be less confusing it the description presented the game as a slow burn romance.