'Everyone Is Asleep' is depressing.
The folklore was pretty neat with the whole setting being the Bermuda Triangle thing going on. The presentation is the classic Carrioff style of grey scale two frame jiggle, with a bit of yellow/orange for contrast. There's a lot of nice moments visually that striking yellow on black, the two moons, and the whole ocean waves in the dark thing going on. The writing is written in a way that I can read it and understand the words. Writing a story about spiraling depression and suicide through metaphor and symbolism, very creative.
You made another one, good job.