You know how they say, "Don't judge a book by its cover"? Well, here, it's "Don't judge a FVN by its aggressive wolf sprite". I'll admit, I was a bit skeptical about the VN when I saw the sprite and the choice of music. The music was distracting and didn't fit the tone this VN was going for. Same with the sprite. Once you've looked past those things, however, you've got a pretty solid folklore tale. I've been noticing a pattern with the May Wolf entries this year where there are a lot of entries with surreal or abstract narratives, and this one's no exception. It's nearly as abstract as some other entries, but there is a lot of symbolism within its narrative that you can interpret in many ways. At first, it seems like a bunch of unrelated events happening one after another. As you read, however, you eventually start to realize what's happening. The story flows quite naturally, helped by its competent prose, at a good pace. I do like the themes it explores throughout the story, and it does give me a lot to think about. It's ultimately about a VN about letting go and accepting the harsh reality, which is always a good message. It's unfortunate that the presentation is the way it is because I quite liked this one. I hope I don't come across as overly harsh. I understand that good art and music are hard to make. However, I think my issue with the presentation isn't that they're of low quality or that they're amateurish. You can have beginner-level art in a VN and still be great, just look at Umineko. The problem I have is that the presentation is at odds with the story and writing, which detracts from the experience. The right kind of music and visuals can really elevate a VN from good to excellent. Again, I really like this VN, but I'm just providing my critique so that the author is able to make better VNs in the future. I recommend this VN if you like