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Free Rein — feedback

Score: 5/5

What stuck with you most? The aftertalk

How did you play? Solo

What did you miss? (optional) Talk of boundaries: Sex acts allowed, condom usage, if raw is allowed whether creampies are allowed, if creampies are allowed whether she's on birth control or not (and include an option to let nature take its course. I personally have a "risk of pregnancy" kink, not necessarily a pregnancy kink).

What do you hope for in the chapters to come? (optional) A discussion about various kinks and/or actually exploring them including things like cum swallowing, pregnancy and pregnancy risk kink, group sex, gloryholes, bukkake, etc. My kink is for the wife to be a complete slut letting many men (strangers) cum inside her without birth control (I'm not asking you to write a scenario where they just jump off the deep end, just letting you know where I'm coming from and would like to be a possible destination of the story)

(duo · en · expliciet · "The glow")

Freerein15 days ago

Hi Clouds

Thank you, I am always looking for feedback like this. The negotiation is the heart of this whole thing, so it means a lot that it's where you want more depth.

You're right that the boundaries can go further. More chapters are coming. There's a first pass already (how far the first time, the condom rule, and a broken rule that pays off later), but the granular stuff you're describing, specific acts, raw, creampies, birth control, the choice to let nature take its course, is exactly where the negotiation layer is built to grow. Of course a story cannot accomodate all aspects of the experience (without being very lenghty), but there is room for more.

And I appreciate the distinction you drew: the risk as the turn-on, not the pregnancy itself. That's a sharp line, and it lands harder negotiated up front than assumed. Thanks for taking the time to be this specific.

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