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Hi Clouds

Thank you, I am always looking for feedback like this. The negotiation is the heart of this whole thing, so it means a lot that it's where you want more depth.

You're right that the boundaries can go further. More chapters are coming. There's a first pass already (how far the first time, the condom rule, and a broken rule that pays off later), but the granular stuff you're describing, specific acts, raw, creampies, birth control, the choice to let nature take its course, is exactly where the negotiation layer is built to grow. Of course a story cannot accomodate all aspects of the experience (without being very lenghty), but there is room for more.

And I appreciate the distinction you drew: the risk as the turn-on, not the pregnancy itself. That's a sharp line, and it lands harder negotiated up front than assumed. Thanks for taking the time to be this specific.

Thank you Marlowe, this is exactly the kind of note I was hoping for, and you've put your finger on something real. You're right: I don't need to know, but you can tell me if you want, is a genuinely different stance from both, tell me everything and I don't want to hear it, and right now the game makes you pick a side that may not be yours. That gap is the whole subject of the game, so leaving it out is the kind of miss I want to fix. It's going on the list! Thank you for taking the time to spell it out, and that you played closely enough to feel the gap.