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I really really really love this book its so good but there's one thing I picked up on that I really wasn't a fan of. We got all this buildup about the mad god and it lowkey feels really intense, but then he turns out to be this sweet caring guy, and while I really like his personality, it feels very anti-climatic. Like it would've been cool if you wrote it that he was completely mad and really dangerous one minute (like he was when we first met him in the clearing) and the next moment he's this nice guy (like Nathan) who just happens to be the only person alive that can save MC. Idk if you've read The Poppy War by RF Kuang but I feel like it would've been so much better if he was written a little bit like Suni. That's just my two cents tho

do you mean Duri'naan? I think you might be confusing them with Valko, Nathanael reveals somewhere around the second or third chapter at the campsite that Valko no longer lives in the shrine. im pretty sure he'll appear somewhere in the later chapters or as an endgame but Duri isn't really meant to be insane/unstable ? Sorry if it came across as rude ik this is an old comment it just stuck out to me

No no I mean Nathan remember he goes like a lil cuckoo and starts controlling MC with strings

OH FUCK i just realized you weren't talking about Duri 😭😭😭😭 I hadn't played that far when I commented sorry

DW💔