Ya its epic i really loved it. In the beginning when i was reading it i remember thinking the writing was a little weird (like almost forced) but it quickly got better. Usually when i read books like these i quickly decide on one RO but all of them had captivating aspects here. Just one thing: yk the guy who is like crazyyy in love with helios (i forgot his name but dont feel like going back through the story and checking)? When you have the option to flirt with him it's really forced. Cuz i mean youve never met him and all of a sudden you love him? Maybe js add like a small scene where you meet him earlier in the book. (Like a playday before Luceris comes to kidnap you.) But otherwise great game I really miss it.
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So i have a question and can someone who knows twine well maybe help me? So I desperately want to write my own IF (this story partly inspired me cuz its so good i love it btw) but i cant figure out how to make a character creator/customizor (eye colour, gender etc). Is there like a turorial i can use? I looked for one but couldnt find one.
So i have a question right. I was reading this (epic story btw i love it so much) and it inspired me to write my own story on Twine. I have a story idea and everything and I watched a couple of twine tutorials because i have no coding knowledge, but i can't figure out how to do a character creator (like eye colour, skin tone, hair colour, gender etc.) How did you do it? Is there like a tutorial i could maybe use? Pls i need help I'm obsessing over this story and I NEED to write my own in which hunter doesnt friendzone me
@atmac, you ok? I've been checking my itch.io almost bi-daily for half a year now, and your last post was over 90 days ago. Sorry if I'm being strange, I'm just worried. After all, this is the first, and best, VN I've ever read. I'm starting to worry something happened (like you got cancer or smth.) Good job on the VN and hope to see more soon.