i have few thing to say
about the story while it does interest me in the story but while i interested I can help but feel like the 0.1 just told me what the story was gonna go so basically spoil it first before we can experient it
the intro should just a introduction to the game story so you just need the bare bone amount of info like who you gonna meet who they are not how you gonna f them that you should let the player experience for themself
there a saying "show not tell" and the intro show too much of what the story will or can be before the story even come so i'll recommend you should after a few update (or when you want to) remake the intro shorter and less info intestsive
but that just my thought on 0.1
anyways i'll will continue to wait for the 0.2 release to see how the story goes