The first part was pretty intriguing and interesting, but the turn to supernatural horror stuff didn’t work for me. A bunch of stuff is thrown at us that didn’t really amount to anything; no correlation or link between them. I liked the relation between the characters though. The folklore theme is mentionned, but not much is done with it.
As for the presentation, the sprites, backgrounds and CGs all look really nice! However the music disappeared in the middle, lessening the impact of the horror scenes some more. Lots of sound effects mentionned in the text are absent as well (like the lightning, the rest of the gun shots and a few more). Also, I didn’t really like the moving textbox, it was distracting.
Overall, it feels rushed and unfinished.