A fun little sexy romp with a bit of a rom-com twist: dating your ex’s father!?^^ Seeing the plan becoming feelings was pretty nice, but a bit inconsistent too. The characters seemed to flip flop on stuff a bit too often. The friend group dynamic was a bit of disaster too in a funny way. (I don’t play ttrpgs but even I could tell that DMing was a bit weird and mean.^^) And finally, the smut was fun to read as well.
The presentation was pretty standard, the sprites were well used, the music fit well. It was a bit weird that the same photos were used for both Ezra’s and Harvey’s house. Also, what’s up with that textbox?
Overall, it was fun, but had some flaws. Good job!