LOVE the visuals. great basic hexmap, header and footer greebles, and that cover is so choice! clever names (i see you with those flyboy references), great flavor, fun statblocks and scenario. even though it's not so dripping with references, this almost feels more like an mgs game than my mgs3 sendup mission feels like mgs3... and i would never complain about that. i really like both the traits, H.E.A.T. especially (i love forcing ridiculous justifications from players in an attempt to do some WANTED bullet-curving nonsense). i think you could add just a little more variety to make the layout scan more easily, as I struggled occasionally to know where to look next in the first few two-column pages, but i really liked what i saw when i did look! please publish more, this is pitch-perfect and very promising.