'sabot/auteur' and their surnames was a good bit. i think FIST Gets Taken Out At The Ballgame is a great conceit, and though it might have been a jam-hastened decision i actually really like the bullet-point lists of descriptive stuff for the different areas. i couldn't make heads or tails of the roll in that 'surveillance' insert, and i think the tri-column landscape layout might be unsuitable for something longer than a tri-fold, especially with a single monochromatic font and no images. that aside, i thought this was clever, well-executed conceptually, and would make for a fun mission (and a great excuse to slow down some organ music for ambience). not sure about the protagonist of baseball assertion, but i'll let it slide if we can agree that the yankees or the dodgers are the antagonists.