bioweapon korean action movie is a great fist flavor. i think you might have hit the mark twain "more time for a shorter letter" thing but hey, we're jamming; there's also no accounting for my text allergy. i'd love some zhuzhing of the layout in that dense middle section. this feels a little more "zoomed out" in terms of scope than i think of fist while still being very boots-on-the-ground, but i like the idea of the city-as-dungeon, location-as-room approach. the extrapolations at the end especially made me like this, as i crave the flip-the-whole-thing-over energy you can only get on tabletop. nice work!