AAAAAAAAAA TYSM!!! I appreciate the time and effort you put in this review! I strongly agree with you about how the rush caused by my ambition is the biggest factor in causing problems for this vn, I wish I spent more time with Lillia's and Stolis' ending instead of... The evil twink, but oh well hindsight is 2020. With all the kind words from the community I'm starting to feel more confident in this work and more than a failure I want to consider this as me testing the limits of my current self.
Fun fact about the theme implementation, I really wanted to showcase all the aspects of folklore with my three characters Lillia (customs), Solis (tales) and Engil (traditions) I was hoping to flesh out these things in Engil route but well it was sent straight to hell.
I am planning on doing a polished version of this game as it has quite grown on me and I'm expecting the word count to double plus like you mentioned more CGs and Larry secret ending (We love you Larry)
Ty for reading and enjoying my work! May (heh) you have a great time reading the other entries of the jam!